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  • Dytoma•550
    @DytomaPosted almost 2 years ago

    Hey👋

    Good job on completing this challenge 👏

    I have some feedback for you:

    • First you can look at the Accessibility Report and the HTML validation report. You can find useful information about you code. When using the ul element make sure you use li elements as children and then you can wrap the content in an anchor tag. So your code might look something like this <ul> <li><a href="">Home</a></li> <li><a href="">New</a></li> <li><a href=""> Popular</a></li> <li><a href=""> Trending</a></li> <li><a href=""> Categories</a></li> </ul>

    • Secondly the hover effects provided by the design system are absent, you can implement that too to your code. You can read about hover effect on MDN docs hover📚

    Happy coding🙌

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  • Dytoma•550
    @DytomaPosted almost 2 years ago

    Hey👋

    Good job on completing this challenge👏you've done a great job

    However I have some suggestions that you can use to improve your code:

    • Firstly when you submit a solution, you can have a look at the Accessibility Report and the HTML Validation Report that gives you useful information and some mistakes that you would want to solve. You can see in the reports that you use multiple IDs twice and as you know IDs have to be unique so you can change one of the duplicated ones.

    • Secondly I'll suggest you use classes instead of IDs. It helps you avoid multiple debugging problems and classes allows you to style multiple elements at a time. There's more reasons to that, you can read more about this on class vs id DEV article.

    • Lastly instead of using your <div id="banner-image"></div> empty, I suggest you append an img element to that div and then use object-fit property in CSS to style as you want.(<div class="banner-image"><img src="./assets/images/image-web-3-desktop.jpg" alt="Desktop image"/></div>).

    That's all for me, Happy coding🙌

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  • Nahuel-cell•220
    @Nahuel-cellSubmitted almost 2 years ago

    I would really appreciate if you could give me feedback on my little project. The most difficult part of this was when I wanted to select another classification and make the orange color of the number go to the new element that the user clicked on. I don't know if I explained myself but I appreciate that you comment on my mistakes or improvements. Just judge for yourself and then tell me.

    Interactive rating component

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    Dytoma•550
    @DytomaPosted almost 2 years ago

    Hey👋

    Good job on completing this challenge👏

    I have some feedback that you can use to improve your code:

    • First instead of using article elements, I will suggest you use div elements and give them a role attribute(eg: <div role="main">....</role>).
    • For the <div class="attribution">......</div> you can add a role="footer" you can learn more about landmarks here. And for <img src="./assets/images/illustration-thank-you.svg" alt="Illustration" class="article__illustration"> I will suggest you add an aria-hidden='true' attribute for screen readers to skip this image as it just serves for decoration.

    Happy coding🙌

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  • Dytoma•550
    @DytomaPosted almost 2 years ago

    Hey👋

    Good job on completing this challenge👏 the animation on the advices looks amazing

    I have some suggestions you might want to implement to improve your code:

    • First you don't need the <header></header> and the <footer></footer> elements as they have empty content thus useless to your code and you could also put your h1 in the main element.
    • For your button, I suggest you give it an aria-label="new advice" and to the image an aria-hidden="true" as the image just serves for decoration. You cam learn more about ARIA.

    Happy coding👏

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  • Dytoma•550
    @DytomaPosted almost 2 years ago

    Hey👋

    Good job on completing this challenge👏

    However I thing you forgot to implement the javascript part for the carousel images and text. And your website is not responsive for mobile versions; you might want to look at that to. If your goal was to just code the layout of the page then congrats👏👏 I hope you will take some time to improve your solution.

    Happy coding

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  • Dytoma•550
    @DytomaPosted almost 2 years ago

    Hey 👋

    Good job on completing this challenge👏

    If you want to have feedback, you should consider adding a repository for others to access your code. The link to your repository is showing a 404 error. Other than that your solution is perfect, responsive for all devices. Congratulations👏

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  • Anouer•510
    @AnouerMokraneSubmitted almost 2 years ago

    hello , this is my solution for news homepage template , any advices can make it better is appreciate.

    Responsive news homepage

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    Dytoma•550
    @DytomaPosted almost 2 years ago

    Hey👋

    Good job on completing this challenge👏

    Here are some suggestions you can use to improve your solution.

    • As you can see your footer element is overlapping with the page's content. So, to avoid that you can use a top: 0 instead of bottom: 0 for users to see who coded the website immediately when they visit the page or leave it as it is but it will be at the bottom of the page thus offscreen; at least it won't cause any overlapping problems.
    • Instead of the article element you can just section elements and then for the sections you can use article I think it'll be better.

    Happy coding🙌

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  • Dytoma•550
    @DytomaPosted almost 2 years ago

    Hey👋

    Good job on completing this challenge, I have some suggestions that you can use to improve your code.

    • First instead of using a div to wrap the dice image, I'll suggest you use a button. The reason for that is that you want screen readers to notice users with disabilities to understand what you're passing through your page and then you can add an aria-label to your button and aria-hidden="true" to the dice image.
    • Here is the code: instead of this <div id="dice-neon-circle" onclick="getAdvice()"><img src="images/icon-dice.svg" alt="" srcset="" /></div> use this <button id="dice-neon-circle" onclick="getAdvice()"><img src="images/icon-dice.svg" alt="" srcset="" /></button>

    And you would want to add some descriptive content to the alt attribute.

    Happy coding🙌

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  • seun•180
    @TaiwolaSubmitted almost 2 years ago

    feedback needed

    • help with the button behavior at the header, they seems to not occupy the whole space (more visible when using mobile)
    • how to the image to cut from the left rather than the right

    Clipboard landing page solution

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    Dytoma•550
    @DytomaPosted almost 2 years ago

    Hey👋

    Good job on completing this challenge. Here are some suggestions you can implement to your code:

    • First the font provided in starting files is absent on your page. You can implement it using Google Fonts
    • For the social icons, as you used images you can provide a descriptive text to the ```alt`` attribute (ex: <a href=""><img src="images/icon-facebook.svg" alt="instagram"></a>) for accessibility.
    • For the mobile version you can add some padding to your div elements.

    That's what I wanted to highlight. Happy coding😁

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  • Dytoma•550
    @DytomaPosted almost 2 years ago

    Hey 👋

    Good job on completing this challenge. I noticed that you didn't use the font provided by the designs and you can do so by using Google fonts and either link it to your html file or import it in your CSS.

    Happy coding🙌

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  • Dytoma•550
    @DytomaPosted almost 2 years ago

    Hey 👋

    Good job on completing this challenge, your solution looks amazing👌

    However I do have one suggestion when I looked at your code:

    • Instead of using a <div class="line"></div> I suggest you use border-bottom as the div add more content to your page, it is better to use borders.

    Happy coding👏

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  • Dytoma•550
    @DytomaPosted almost 2 years ago

    Hey👋

    Good job on completing this challenge

    For accessibility issues, I'll suggest you add the aria-label='next advice' attribute to your button and an aria-hidden="true" to the image inside the button as it just serves for decoration. You can read more about ARIA on mdn aria docs📚.

    Happy coding🙌

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