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  Brian Muniz Silveira•200

  @BrianMunizSilveiraPosted 5 months ago

  Code Review and Suggestions

  Positive Highlights:

  1. Consistent Design System: The use of CSS variables (:root) centralizes theme colors and makes maintenance easier.
  2. Semantic HTML: The structure is logical and aids readability with appropriate use of tags like <div> and <a>.
  3. Responsiveness: Grid layout with place-items: center ensures a visually centered design on all screen sizes.
  4. Clean CSS: Organized selectors and well-separated styles enhance readability.

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  Suggested Improvements:

  1. Accessibility Enhancements

  • Alt Text: Provide descriptive alt attributes for images to ensure screen reader compatibility.

    <img class="hero" src="illustration-hero.svg" alt="Illustration of a music service banner">
    <img class="icon" src="icon-music.svg" alt="Music note icon">
  

  • Button Semantics: Use <button> elements for interactive actions like "Proceed to Payment" instead of <a> to improve semantics and usability.

  <button class="payment">Proceed to Payment</button>
  <button class="cancel">Cancel Order</button>
  

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  2. Responsive Design

  • Address the typo in the media query for screen widths less than 40px (likely meant for mobile). Update it to target realistic device sizes:

  @media screen and (max-width: 480px) {
      body {
          background-image: url(pattern-background-mobile.svg);
      }
      .container {
          width: 90%;
      }
      h1 {
          font-size: 1.5em;
      }
  }
  

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  3. CSS Improvements

  Overly Specific Selectors: Simplify and avoid redundancy. For example:

  a.payment:hover {
      background-color: var(--plan-payment-Hover-Color);
  }
  

  Instead, use a shared hover style for buttons:

  .btn {
      text-decoration: none;
      display: block;
      border-radius: 10px;
      text-align: center;
  }
  .btn:hover {
      background-color: var(--plan-payment-Hover-Color);
  }
  

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  4. Performance Optimization

  • Preload Critical Assets: Use rel="preload" for critical fonts to improve loading speed.

  <link rel="preload" href="https://fonts.googleapis.com/css2?family=Red+Hat+Display:wght@500;700;900&display=swap" as="style">
  

  • Reduce Font Overhead: Include only required font weights and styles instead of multiple families.

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  5. Content Alignment

  • Ensure spacing consistency by using padding instead of margin-left and margin-right in .txt-body:

  .txt-body {
      padding: 0 20px;
      margin-top: 30px;
  }
  

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  Summary

  Your solution is well-structured and adheres to modern CSS practices. By addressing these suggestions, you’ll enhance accessibility, responsiveness, and maintainability, making your project even more polished. Keep up the great work!

  Marked as helpful

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  mamman-naf•130

  @mamman-nafPosted 5 months ago

  @BrianMunizSilveira Thank you so much for taking your time to review my project. Will make sure go work on the corrections you made and implement them in my future projects. Please feel free to correct me any time. I’m eager go learn

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  Brian Muniz Silveira•200

  @BrianMunizSilveiraPosted 5 months ago

  @mamman-naf Thank you for sharing your project!

  I'm happy to help with the corrections and suggestions. Keep practicing and applying what you've learned, and you'll definitely see great improvement in your future projects.

  If you ever need more tips or feedback, feel free to reach out. Good luck and keep up the great work!

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