Base Apparel - Coming Soon Page (Responsive) in HTML/CSS/JS
Design comparison
Solution retrospective
Hi everyone !
Here is my solution for this wonderful project :)
I can tell you I'm proud of this one ! I've added a few things to glorify the original design (but it's mostly to practice on even more stuff).
Let me know what you think !!!
Community feedback
- @DudeldupsPosted over 1 year ago
Hello 👋🏻
The solution looks close to the design on desktop but let me point out some things you can improve:
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The site is not responsive. You should always try to code a
mobile-first
workflow. Set the base CSS rules for mobile and then work your way up with media queries for larger screens. -
When working with mobile-first approach, you should consider screen sizes from 320px and up. Since you worked desktop-first, your site acts very weird when the screen comes to mobile screen sizes.
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Try to avoid importing the font via CSS. It's better to load it into your HTML, but even better considering loading time is to have it hosted inside your project and then importing the file (there is a download button for the google fonts on the top right of the page)
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Font sizes should be declared using
rem
and notpx
. This way, the size will adapt for people who have set a bigger base font size in their browser. -
Same goes for other sizes that you set like
margin
,padding
orwidth
. If you have set an element to have a width of 50px it is a fixed state. If the user has set a bigger font size, they probably want to see not only the text bigger, but also the other content -
In your CSS you should avoid using ID selectors but rather use class selectors. ID selectors have a higher specificity and you may end up overwriting something that you didn't want, also it may cause unwanted errors that are hard to debug.
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You are not using a modern CSS reset. By having all default element properties deleted, you can style everything the way you want and you don't have any unwanted styles in your design. https://andy-bell.co.uk/a-modern-css-reset/
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Instead of using
height: 100vh
, you should usemin-height
. This way, the content can still expand the 100vh if necessary. -
In your HTML, you have the <label> hidden by default and not a descernible text on it. Screen readers will not be able to announce to visually impaired users what the label reads. It's better to always have a label that can be read, even if you have to visually hide it with CSS because it's not supposed to be actually visible.
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Input and label should always be connected and have a proper description. Use the
for
attribute on the label and the same word as theid
on the input. -
If an image is only decorative, leave the
alt
text blank like so:alt=""
. This way, screen readers will skip the image. In all other cases, always provide a descriptive alt text for images. -
Don't use a div with an ID of header, use the <header> element
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Instead of writing out the words in uppercase, use CSS to transform them to uppercase. Screen readers may pronounce the letters one by one which would be a bad user experience
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And you should check your email validation. You can type in "a@a." and the email is validated
It would be a good practice if you started this challenge anew. Since you seem to have developed many bad habits regarding your code, you should try to wipe them out quickly 😉
If you have any questions, feel free to ask. Happy coding 👾
Marked as helpful3@VHugo632Posted over 1 year ago@Dudeldups
Hi !
Thanks for your opinion :)
I'll try to take your advice into account !
I really started web development 1 year ago now (without doing it all the time either, just a few times to practice).
In your opinion, is my level correct, knowing what I've just said ? Also, how would you rate my solution (out of 20) ?
0@DudeldupsPosted over 1 year ago@VHugo632 Yeah I know it can be tiring and hard to motivate to do tutorials but there are some major flaws in your code. I'd just advise you to go through the basics once more and if you see something that you don't know, practice it. Writing the actual code helps more than just reading it or watching a video and hear someone say it 😋
Just look through the resources here on the page and find what works best for you.
https://www.frontendmentor.io/resources
And try to concentrate on HTML and regular CSS for now, no need to animate anything. This is something you can still add when the main scaffolding stands 😄
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